The Society of Illusions!

The untrue smiles we spark,

Even when within, it's dull and dark,

The shallow hearts we bear,

And the agony which we carry!

It all occurs when youth and disdain marry,

Touching the peak of deception,

In a world so deceptive as ours,

When we hide our scars,

With a glamorous mask so hollow,

But that's the trend we follow,

Fabricating our beads of lies,

With an exorbitant necklace of gaiety and pride,

Pretending to always be right! 

The false promises and distrust,

Lie shriveled up deep below the unrevealed bottoms,

Of a broken heart



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  1. This poem touches the depths of my heart πŸ₯Ί

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  2. Your poem is really relatable to the lives of the average person

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  3. It's so well written ✨ I really like the way it flows and it's meaning πŸ’–

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    1. Thankss so much Nandita! ❤️✨
      Much love to you

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  4. A really beautiful and accurate piece of poetry. Very well written!!

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    1. Thanks so much for the praise Ira! Means a lot! ❤️✨

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  5. Love this ♥ Relatable to a lot of people

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  6. Very thought provoking and deep. Keep going 😍

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  7. This is such a beautiful piece!! Great work πŸ‘πŸ©΅

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  8. A beautiful rendition of an ugly truth. Way to go!

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  9. Beautiful lines written by a beautiful soul. Keep growing n shine the way you are. All the very very best. We are always there for your support. Keep writing goof content like this.. :)

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    1. Thank you so much sir! So nice of you to appreciate my work! πŸ™πŸ»✨

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  10. Wow wow. Loved, how beautifully you captured your thoughts into words. Truly a creative piece of work. Keep on writing πŸ‘

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  11. What a pure art ! 🀩
    You’ve got a real talent for this. What an amazing work Vaani !! ❤️❤️
    Keep it up ! πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  12. You’re so talented!! Absolutely love everything you write 🫢🏻🫢🏻Every word expresses an emotion and that’s the true beauty of your talent! Keep it up. Wish you nothing but success!!! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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    1. Thank you so much for such beatiful words Samira! Means a lot! ❤️✨

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  13. Such beautiful thoughts and expressed so well. Good job dear

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  14. Fantastic piece, Vaani! ✨
    Please also look to get your work published in some magazines - the depth of thought your posts convey is so moving and refreshing. Kudos! πŸ‘πŸ»
    Looking forward to seeing more from you!

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    1. Thank you so much for such motivating words ma'am! I'm glad you liked it! ❤️✨

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  15. Amazing Job Vaani :)
    It is one of the truest poems i have read in quite some time and it has really touched me.
    Keep up the great work and do share :)

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    1. Thank you so much for the beautiful appreciation ma'am! ❤️✨

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  16. Happy lamba😁

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    1. Sad lamba πŸ₯Ί

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    2. I'm looking for a man in finance , trust fund , 6'5 , blue eyesπŸ’ΈπŸ’΅πŸ’²πŸš½πŸ§»

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